Friday, 27 March 2015

my march break

My march break was a good time for me. Because I  have been working hard,I didn't have enough time to played with my daughter.  I enjoyed of my march break.I with my daughter(name is Rachel 5 years old)went to the shopping,the dance class,the swimming`pool,playground,and the Sky zone place.Rachel was very happy.I was happy too.


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1 comment:

  1. This is great for a start! Why not use the Editing Checklist to go over it. And have a classmate check it again before updating Version 2.

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