A great start! Would you like to describe the day a little more? Usually, there's an introductory paragraph, followed by a couple of paragraphs of description. And then you could finish with a concluding paragraph which could bring us up to the present.
A great start! Would you like to describe the day a little more? Usually, there's an introductory paragraph, followed by a couple of paragraphs of description. And then you could finish with a concluding paragraph which could bring us up to the present.
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